Submission (#5967) Approved
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Prompt
Submitted
18 June 2023, 18:07:25 UTC (1 year ago)
Processed
3 July 2023, 19:50:26 UTC (1 year ago) by Zevanox
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Link to Reosean's import:
https://www.deviantart.com/reos-empire/art/Ranibow-Sprimkle-14281-894683712
Link to Companion:
https://www.deviantart.com/reos-empire/art/The-Phantasmal-Queen-10800-828263326
https://www.deviantart.com/reos-empire/art/The-Crimson-Guard-14273-894411471
Link to all three trials: https://www.deviantart.com/chrysokami/art/WoR-PT-s-Jungle-Madness-Sypha-Seoliss-Lester-967164401
Prompts Used: Warrenfall Expedition through jungle - Sustain Trial, hunting Coypu - Loyalty trial, standing guard.
Previous Correction:
https://wor-keeper.com/submissions/view/5834
For the Sustain Trial, there doesn't seem to be enough written about the reosans actively hunting. Right now, I am only counting about 300 words, and at minimum, there needs to be at least 75% of the prompt in the piece. If you added around 300-400 words to this, it should be fine! Some ideas that you could use to extend the word count could be to add some more detail of them stalking their prey, or perhaps them getting caught hunting and have to try a second time!
https://www.deviantart.com/reos-empire/art/Ranibow-Sprimkle-14281-894683712
Link to Companion:
https://www.deviantart.com/reos-empire/art/The-Phantasmal-Queen-10800-828263326
https://www.deviantart.com/reos-empire/art/The-Crimson-Guard-14273-894411471
Link to all three trials: https://www.deviantart.com/chrysokami/art/WoR-PT-s-Jungle-Madness-Sypha-Seoliss-Lester-967164401
Prompts Used: Warrenfall Expedition through jungle - Sustain Trial, hunting Coypu - Loyalty trial, standing guard.
Previous Correction:
https://wor-keeper.com/submissions/view/5834
For the Sustain Trial, there doesn't seem to be enough written about the reosans actively hunting. Right now, I am only counting about 300 words, and at minimum, there needs to be at least 75% of the prompt in the piece. If you added around 300-400 words to this, it should be fine! Some ideas that you could use to extend the word count could be to add some more detail of them stalking their prey, or perhaps them getting caught hunting and have to try a second time!
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